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Jackie Dana's avatar

Wow. This story was incredible. It hooked me immediately. And you have all of the bits - the foreshadowing, the tension, the suspense, the refrain. I want more!

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John Gibson's avatar

Thanks! I love writing about Ozarkers and our old ways. I suspect that I'll want to tell more of Eliza's story in the future, and I KNOW that I have more stories about her family in progress.

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